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hood
Member | Tue Oct 23 13:54:02 Hey, I've been putting together some more writing in continuance of the short story I had previously posted here. Are you interested in/can I send you what I have for proof reading? Right now I think I'm maybe 2/3-3/4 finished with my next installment of ideation, completely rough at this point. Also if anyone else is interested in reading, feel free to ask. |
Cherub Cow
Member | Tue Oct 23 16:25:41 Sure! :D I have the same e-mail if you want to use that |
hood
Member | Tue Oct 23 16:54:25 Cool, thanks! Email sent. :) |
Cherub Cow
Member | Tue Oct 23 21:49:16 Got it! I have a long day tomorrow (Wednesday), but I'll read it when I get home :) |
McKobb
Member | Wed Oct 24 16:22:14 Not much of a proof reader but I'd like to read what ya got! |
hood
Member | Wed Oct 24 16:43:41 Well, proof reading/editing/suggestions/comments/etc. But CC is also good with grammar and I'm not great with commas. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZiWZ-w2P9HEg2vvjkcVhy1a7yyJW34OA/view?usp=sharing google drive link for you. |
NightBloom
Innocent | Thu Nov 01 10:01:38 I'd be interested. |
hood
Member | Thu Nov 01 12:13:08 Link is above, feel free to read. If you want to go full editing with comments, I can email you a word file (do I have your email?). Otherwise, (hopefully) enjoy. |
Cherub Cow
Member | Fri Nov 02 02:10:00 Sorry I'm dropping the ball :( ... lots of work :( :( ... soon!! |
NightBloom
Innocent | Fri Nov 02 08:36:44 Will read today. :) |
NightBloom
Innocent | Fri Nov 02 12:04:09 Great start. The transition from her being in the car to waking up in a hotel needs better explanation I think. The rest is awesome |
hood
Member | Fri Nov 02 12:25:35 Heh, nb. That transition was my note to myself to tell me to actually finish writing it. :D I think I'm adding another 2 parts (I would say scenes, but the first part will technically have two scenes) to finish out this chunk. Thank you, I'm glad you like it. |
hood
Member | Mon Nov 19 10:47:32 Polite reminder for cc. |
Agri
Patron | Tue Dec 25 05:38:00 Polite reminder for cc. |
tumbleweed
the wanderer | Tue Dec 25 11:31:59 are those palm readings done? |
Cherub Cow
Member | Tue Dec 25 13:23:10 lulz.. I wonder if I still have those images on a dead hard drive somewhere ;) |
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