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hood
Member
Tue Oct 23 13:54:02
Hey, I've been putting together some more writing in continuance of the short story I had previously posted here. Are you interested in/can I send you what I have for proof reading?

Right now I think I'm maybe 2/3-3/4 finished with my next installment of ideation, completely rough at this point.



Also if anyone else is interested in reading, feel free to ask.
Cherub Cow
Member
Tue Oct 23 16:25:41
Sure! :D I have the same e-mail if you want to use that
hood
Member
Tue Oct 23 16:54:25
Cool, thanks! Email sent. :)
Cherub Cow
Member
Tue Oct 23 21:49:16
Got it! I have a long day tomorrow (Wednesday), but I'll read it when I get home :)
McKobb
Member
Wed Oct 24 16:22:14
Not much of a proof reader but I'd like to read what ya got!
hood
Member
Wed Oct 24 16:43:41
Well, proof reading/editing/suggestions/comments/etc. But CC is also good with grammar and I'm not great with commas.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZiWZ-w2P9HEg2vvjkcVhy1a7yyJW34OA/view?usp=sharing

google drive link for you.
NightBloom
Innocent
Thu Nov 01 10:01:38
I'd be interested.
hood
Member
Thu Nov 01 12:13:08
Link is above, feel free to read.

If you want to go full editing with comments, I can email you a word file (do I have your email?). Otherwise, (hopefully) enjoy.
Cherub Cow
Member
Fri Nov 02 02:10:00
Sorry I'm dropping the ball :( ... lots of work :( :( ... soon!!
NightBloom
Innocent
Fri Nov 02 08:36:44
Will read today. :)
NightBloom
Innocent
Fri Nov 02 12:04:09
Great start. The transition from her being in the car to waking up in a hotel needs better explanation I think. The rest is awesome
hood
Member
Fri Nov 02 12:25:35
Heh, nb. That transition was my note to myself to tell me to actually finish writing it. :D

I think I'm adding another 2 parts (I would say scenes, but the first part will technically have two scenes) to finish out this chunk.

Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
hood
Member
Mon Nov 19 10:47:32
Polite reminder for cc.
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