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Everknight rank	Fri Jul 07 11:39:12 2017 At some point you have to stop revising and say something is done. If you have Kindle Unlimited give this a read and let me know what you think. https://ww...hronicles-ebook/dp/B073HWB46F/
Ubes JAC rank	Sat Aug 05 07:11:53 2017 I do not own a Kindle, however, congrats on taking a pretty big step. Respect.
Everknight rank	Tue Aug 08 20:51:56 2017 If you want to read it I can get you a pdf or google driver version. I need feedback on how to improve so I don't waste anyone's time with future novels.:-) email me at cannottamethewind@gmail.com and say pdf or google drive and I'll get you a link or the file. Goes for anyone here too.. even FSB if he still hangs around here. My ego can stand a "this sucks," or "incomprehensible."
The Bard rank	Thu Aug 24 16:56:21 2017 on the plus side, it probably can't be both. How could they say "it sucks" if it was "incomprehensible"?
Palem rank	Thu Aug 24 17:42:04 2017 It sucks. Literally incomprehensible.
Cherub Cow rank	Thu Aug 24 19:39:16 2017 [The Bard]: "How could they say "it sucks" if it was "incomprehensible"?" Check the UP GoT threads to find out! ;D
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