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hood
rank | Tue Oct 23 20:54:02 2018 Hey, I've been putting together some more writing in continuance of the short story I had previously posted here. Are you interested in/can I send you what I have for proof reading? Right now I think I'm maybe 2/3-3/4 finished with my next installment of ideation, completely rough at this point. Also if anyone else is interested in reading, feel free to ask. |
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Cherub Cow
rank | Tue Oct 23 23:25:41 2018 Sure! :D I have the same e-mail if you want to use that |
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hood
rank | Tue Oct 23 23:54:25 2018 Cool, thanks! Email sent. :) |
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Cherub Cow
rank | Wed Oct 24 04:49:16 2018 Got it! I have a long day tomorrow (Wednesday), but I'll read it when I get home :) |
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McKobb
rank | Wed Oct 24 23:22:14 2018 Not much of a proof reader but I'd like to read what ya got! |
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hood
rank | Wed Oct 24 23:43:41 2018 Well, proof reading/editing/suggestions/comments/etc. But CC is also good with grammar and I'm not great with commas. https://dr...hy1a7yyJW34OA/view?usp=sharing google drive link for you. |
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NightBloom
rank | Thu Nov 01 17:01:38 2018 I'd be interested. |
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hood
rank | Thu Nov 01 19:13:08 2018 Link is above, feel free to read. If you want to go full editing with comments, I can email you a word file (do I have your email?). Otherwise, (hopefully) enjoy. |
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Cherub Cow
rank | Fri Nov 02 09:10:00 2018 Sorry I'm dropping the ball :( ... lots of work :( :( ... soon!! |
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NightBloom
rank | Fri Nov 02 15:36:44 2018 Will read today. :) |
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NightBloom
rank | Fri Nov 02 19:04:09 2018 Great start. The transition from her being in the car to waking up in a hotel needs better explanation I think. The rest is awesome |
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hood
rank | Fri Nov 02 19:25:35 2018 Heh, nb. That transition was my note to myself to tell me to actually finish writing it. :D I think I'm adding another 2 parts (I would say scenes, but the first part will technically have two scenes) to finish out this chunk. Thank you, I'm glad you like it. |
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hood
rank | Mon Nov 19 18:47:32 2018 Polite reminder for cc. |
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Agri
rank | Tue Dec 25 13:38:00 2018 Polite reminder for cc. |
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tumbleweed
rank | Tue Dec 25 19:31:59 2018 are those palm readings done? |
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Cherub Cow
rank | Tue Dec 25 21:23:10 2018 lulz.. I wonder if I still have those images on a dead hard drive somewhere ;) |
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